Sunday, February 16, 2014

February Course Material

Doesn't it seem weirdly early to be doing this again? We're only halfway through the month...

So we read Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead, did a whole bunch of analyzing, and were informed that we sucked at writing thesis/intro paragraphs. But it's okay, because Ms. Holmes gave us a workshop to hone our skills, and put them to the test the following day.

Maybe an easy place to begin is the intro paragraph boot-camp we did. As of now I have not revised my open prompt's intro, but I plan to do that before they are peer edited and graded and such. I'm glad we did that practice, because I needed some guidance with the essays. I wish we did a little more writing practice in class regarding how to structure the essays. In history themed AP essays it was easy to make a tricolon thesis and there you have your three body paragraphs. Anyone who took AP World especially knows exactly what I'm describing. AP Science essays are just detailed explanations that follow no structure (and therefore, I'm great at those!) but what do I do for lit? I often find that my theses argue one thing, or maybe a two-element idea, but even then how do I fill body paragraphs? Do I argue the same thing from three different angles? Any advice on structure..?

With regard to R and G... My hour has been discussing this idea that Ros and Guil are characters and so their lives are controlled by fate as the author (Shakespeare) wrote it. The Players are outside of Hamlet and see that R and G's lives are fated, believing themselves to be different. But we (audience of real people) are outside of Stoppard's play and see that the Players are also fated by the words that Stoppard wrote for them. So are we free from fate and driving our own boats? Or is there a superior power out there that writes the play we are all trapped in?

One last thing, I was listening to Pandora radio and a song came on that totally sounded like it fit the theme of R and G are Dead and I was so excited that I jerked and the cord to my earbuds pulled taught and my phone was hurled off my bathroom counter, where it shattered into phone, battery, and battery cover all over the tile. Pandora did not save the track history, so the song is lost forever. But believe me, it fit so closely I wonder if the artist based it off of Stoppard's play!

We'll never know.

3 comments:

  1. Eh Mary,
    Sucks. About you're phone. Maybe you shouldn't have had a spaz attack, eh? I'm making fun of you, but you know how I am. Anywho, I noticed your question on how to structure a lit essay structure and here are my intelligent AP Lit worthy thoughts and bits of advice...Je ne sais pas. I don't know. I'm just as clueless as you are. I hate essays. They hate me. We've reached an agreement, so I can only hate them so much. Sorry. I know, why the heck did I answer the question? Umm, because I could. But I would have to agree with you. S.O.S. I'd appreciate a daily tutorial on essay structure...actually, I'm lying. I'm paying someone to write my essay.Interesting though, the differences in each subject's essay structure. Science is the way to go. What did you think about Ros and Guil the characters? Anything stand out to you and you alone? I'm not sure I should be asking these questions because the time before and after we wrote these posts are quite different. We've learned a lot since the first read through. As in, we all now are forming our own thesis statements! Next post, I guess. Has any other thing that we've covered this period connected back to your life? Nice job dude.

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  2. I think that this post is very thorough for the things that you did cover, but I wish you would have included the movie viewing (because I feel that it was a significant event) and the Ian Johnston article. I mainly wanted you to write about that so I could hear your opinions on the matter. So many people had very passionate opinions on the article, and I haven't really heard much of a consensus at all, so I would just like to have heard yours as well :) I can't believe that happened to your phone, oh my god! The mystery of never being able to know what song could possibly relate to Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead will haunt me for eternity, I am sure. I agree with both you and Ludia regarding essays, they are painfully tedious and time consuming and I dread the upcoming months when we will only write more and more and more in many classes!

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  3. Hey Mary,

    Once again, Sierra's right. There were a couple of topics left untouched. And since a lot of people, including myself, had such strong opinions on Jonston's lecture, I'm kind of dying to hear more juicy opinions. So just me, but I'm curious to hear what you think there.

    And also...WHAT WAS THE SONG?! REDISCOVER THE SONG FOR THE SAKE OF T-SHIRTS!!

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